When humans terraformed Mars, they turned a desolate planet into a thriving world. But what they didn’t know was that they had awakened another civilization that had been there all along....
This was delightful :) I especially liked the descriptions of the Wir (singular of Wiri?): "voice like a muted avalanche, a glacial smile, earthquake of a laugh."
Just finished reading this and taking some notes. You'll get more comments when I send you the scoring, but wanted to let you know that 1) This has been officially received, and 2) I ENJOYED THIS! Really love the energy you bring to this competition and looking forward to seeing what you bring for future challenges. Thank you for this!
I have a Penelope at home. Such a beautiful tale.
This was a fun tale. I want to read more tales of Penelope!
So sweet! Everyone's life is definitely about to get a lot more interesting.
This was delightful :) I especially liked the descriptions of the Wir (singular of Wiri?): "voice like a muted avalanche, a glacial smile, earthquake of a laugh."
A tough assignment for two thousand words, but you did a good job of character development and putting me in Penelope's space.
Entertaining, fun, and gave me pleasant nostalgia of Alice in Wonderland but with Smurfs. :D
This was so delightful! A Martian fairy tale - I love it!
Wow, this is a lighthearted take on a chase that warmed my heart and put a smile on my face as I remember many childhood tales. How lovely!
Just finished reading this and taking some notes. You'll get more comments when I send you the scoring, but wanted to let you know that 1) This has been officially received, and 2) I ENJOYED THIS! Really love the energy you bring to this competition and looking forward to seeing what you bring for future challenges. Thank you for this!